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Dreams falling from my hand
Like small golden grains of sand.
I watch them, sparkle and shine,
Knowing they will never be mine.

They're stolen, one by one
Shot far from me by a gun.
One was plucked apart by love,
Another kidnapped by a dove.

Hate is sharp and tears them-
Pain's strength has crushed them.
I just watch them all,
In their golden waterfall.
Just a poem I wrote at midnight last night...
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Kankerblossom13 Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
LassieBob Featured By Owner Oct 11, 2012  Student Photographer
Thanks :)
Miss-blyss Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
this is absolutely wonderful... <3 never stop writing
LassieBob Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2012  Student Photographer
I hope I won't =]
RollingFrog Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This has to be a personal favorite of mine!

I'm a poet myself and I just love how you kept the subject pure and yet placed it in words so easy to understand. I have trouble with this myself, keeping the concept in the reader's reach while painting a deep and meaningful picture as well. I also find it intriguing that you wrote this at midnight. I find from my own experience that some of the best poetry can simply slip out of nowhere, without preparation or thought.

Please keep on writing!
LassieBob Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you so much... That means so much to me! Much of my poetry comes to me late at night, thus I have to force myself to grope for a pencil in the dark and scribble them down. I'm glad you like it, and I hope you check some more of my work out =]
RollingFrog Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
I certainly will:D!

I opened a new group recently called ThePenMastersLounge and if you're interested we'd love to have you. It's not much of a group, in fact you'd be the first member to join, but I'm hopeful it will grow. There will always be a seat at the table for you if you want it:), but of course you don't have to part of a group for poeple to see you are a real PenMaster.

Keep on rolling on!
LassieBob Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you =]

I will definitely think about it, and tell some of my friends about it!
SakuraJBlossom Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You did a great job using end rhyme and meter to evoke the tone of the piece. I am impressed with the emotion you've managed to put into the three four line stanzas.
LassieBob Featured By Owner Feb 12, 2012  Student Photographer
I tried to put as much feeling into my poetry as possible... I'm glad it's showing through =]
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