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When I gave myself to you,
I gave
Body
Mind
Heart.


You promised that you were true,
We'd never
Stop
Break
Part.


But now that you've left me
I've lost
Joy
Time
Hunger.


I wonder now, how it could be?
We were
Naive
Blind
Younger.


What should I call this new found addiction?
Evil, Sinful, Exciting?
Oh what strange, wry contradiction...
You need time to clean out your attic
But freedom, love, cannot come without cost.
So here I am- Psychosomatic,
Yes dear, my appetite is lost.
Part of my 100 themes challenge-
#97 "Dying"


I wrote this for the prompt at #PoetryWeek ---> Psychosomatic



I'm taking this from experience. As of right now, I understand this word to an unbelievable level. It's amazing how you can relate to certain things at certain times.... Coincidence? I doubt it.
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WillowOshawottSprite Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
This is the first thing I've faved and i have to say.... it is possibly the best thing i could have faved!!!
and thanks for my fav by the way. We share a love of poetry!
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LassieBob Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Student Photographer
Aw shucks... :blushes:

I'm glad you like it. And you're welcome for the favorite =]
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WillowOshawottSprite Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
It was just nice to get feedback so soon I guess.... it must be really cool to have been on deviant art for a whole year now!
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LassieBob Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Student Photographer
Almost two years :) Good luck, I hope it works out well for you
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WillowOshawottSprite Featured By Owner Aug 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Cheers!
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GlambertInTheBVBArmy Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
your wording and writing style is wonderful<3
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LassieBob Featured By Owner Aug 20, 2012  Student Photographer
:blushes: Thank you
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GlambertInTheBVBArmy Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome :D
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LordLJCornellPhotos Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
Pain is on the page. Very eloquent. I love the structure you have used.
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LassieBob Featured By Owner Aug 14, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you.
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