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What if death,
Was one breath-
Away?

How would you live,
Through your last day?

Scream to the world
"I love you",
So all may know it's true?

Spend all your money,
Or save it for a miniature you?

Close your eyes in shock-
Then live your life again,
Longing for one more word to pen?

Smile with your family,
Hide the time from them?

Do you desperately pull,
Yank at the hourglass
Glued firmly to the table?

Does your mind go blank,
Suddenly unstable?

If death is only,
One breath-
Away?
Just popped into my head- Not the best poem I've written, but oh well.
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RebelliousRabbit Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
'save all your money for a miniature you' <-- love this bit, clever rhyme
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WinterofFire Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
I love the part about the hour glass, this is beautiful.
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LassieBob Featured By Owner May 23, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you. I like it too♥
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dannyboy1994 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Lulz. I like it... I tell random people I love them... It's funny... I also enjoy convincing random people I'm gay... Just saying
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LassieBob Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Student Photographer
Enjoy life to the fullest... Lol :)
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dannyboy1994 Featured By Owner May 22, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
And so I do :)
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