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My life is full of fragments,
The pieces of what was;
As sharp as severed glasses
Reminders of dead love.

So rough around the edges,
I'm always being cut;
The sting of broken pledges
And doors that can’t be shut.

This house seems to be empty
And I’m stranded all alone.
I wonder who has left me-
Should I call this place my home?

Where the shadows silently linger,
Was it once where angels played?
Could the touch of a gentle finger
Have made our love be stayed?

Looking back at all the pieces
Of the life we left behind,
My hand slowly releases
What is left of all our time.
Number 24 in my 100 themes adventure, "Memory".

Memories can cut in many ways. I simply tried to express the emotions felt when I experience their sting... It's a little abstract, so I apologize. But i hope you enjoy =]
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crazi-4-muffinz Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
Wonderful!
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LassieBob Featured By Owner Dec 7, 2012  Student Photographer
Thank you
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highlander1791 Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2012  Hobbyist Photographer
thanks for the fav, wonderful lyrics!!!
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LassieBob Featured By Owner Dec 3, 2012  Student Photographer
Anytime, and thank you :)
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ArachnoWolf Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Nicely put :)
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LassieBob Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Student Photographer
Thanks :}
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ArachnoWolf Featured By Owner Nov 13, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
You're welcome :)
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WarriorPoetAdam Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
really good
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LassieBob Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student Photographer
I'm glad you think so :)
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BreatheAngelicLove Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Student General Artist
love it :)
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